I have to say this story is quite interesting. Good interaction between Tony and Helen. I like it that you don't tell the reader her name until the end and that we don't get to know anything specific about her. She's a friend of Tony he hasn't seen in two years, so she could be an old colleague from Baltimore, but it possible just as well, that he knows her from college or somewhere else.
Anyway, great story - and a good way to make Gibbs jealous. Got a good laugh out of me ;)
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Date: 2008-02-15 11:34 am (UTC)Anyway, great story - and a good way to make Gibbs jealous. Got a good laugh out of me ;)
Steph